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From: Milk Bar

Subject: “Wait, you deliver whole cakes?!”

Preview text: Yep! And your first bite is going to be SO good.

Milk Bar logo with "$15 Off Orders $80+ With Code WELCOME15." Headline "FROM OUR BAKERY TO YOUR DOOR" explains desserts are baked, flash-frozen, and shipped nationwide, even layered cakes, with an "ORDER DESSERTS" button. Photo of founder Christina Tosi outside a storefront holding a Birthday Cake under "MEET THE BAKER BEHIND IT ALL," noting she's a James Beard award winner and Milk Bar has baked since 2008. A grid shows four picks: Milk Bar Pie, Birthday Cake, Cookie Faves Tin, and Skippy Peanut Butter Crunch Pie, each with "SHOP THE PICK." A trust banner reads "BAKING UP YOUR FAVES SINCE 2008, EXPERTLY PACKAGED WITH CARE, DELIVERED FRESH & FAST NATIONWIDE." Footer has the logo, navigation links, social icons, address, and offer terms.

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Grade B.

86/1004/5 Best of Email

A shipping doubt answered before the ask

Milk Bar's subject line names the skepticism around shipping whole cakes, then the body and Christina Tosi's own photo resolve it before the button ever asks for the order.

Editor’s note
New subscribers don't know where to start, so Milk Bar hands them Christina Tosi's own favorites: pie, cake, cookie tin, done. The $15 code sits right above one clear button.

Why this email made the gallery

  1. Trust & compliance scored 100 out of 100

    One-click unsubscribe

    It has List-Unsubscribe plus List-Unsubscribe-Post: One-Click, exactly what Gmail and Yahoo require for bulk senders.

  2. CTA scored 89 out of 100

    CTA appears early

    The first CTA shows up just 23% of the way down, so readers can order desserts without much scrolling.

  3. Images scored 87 out of 100

    Close crops that show texture

    Sprinkles on the cookie and the layers of the cake photo make the desserts look worth the click.

  4. Images scored 87 out of 100

    Every image has alt text

    Images-off and screen-reader friendly, so the message still comes through no matter how the email is viewed.

  5. Layout scored 97 out of 100

    Columns stack on a phone

    Media queries switch the layout to full width on a small screen, so blocks reflow into one column instead of shrinking to pinch and zoom.

Grade breakdownHow this email scored across the 12 categories. The 3 strongest are highlighted; hover or tap a category for what it measures.Show

Inbox

  • 99 out of 100
  • 81 out of 100
  • 81 out of 100
  • 88 out of 100
  • 100 out of 100

Message

  • 79 out of 100
  • 89 out of 100
  • 32 out of 100
  • 85 out of 100

Design

  • 97 out of 100
  • 87 out of 100
  • 76 out of 100